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she licked the spoon
like she was trying to displace the metal
invisible saccharine catalyst for a first impression

his eyes watch tonguetip
white-knuckled grip on polyester thighs
in his head she was bent over the table, begging

whore red painted nails
sliding idly over wonderbra brand cleavage
nylon knees parted revealing bare lips

blue jeans and a zipper hostage takers
a hand inadvertantly rubbing over what can't be freed
his cheeks mimic her nails with a gasp

carefully folding stubborn printed tabloid
knee jostling metal table, coffee spilt
softening the hardness of his admiration for her

eyes filled with different saline liquid
than the kind in his now retracted seed carriers
she notices him now with a botox enhanced smile

men empathetically crossing their legs
gestures of solidarity for a fallen brethren
and she uncrosses hers again to catch another fly with honey
©2004-2010 ~smokeofthebkeeper
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:iconinfrunitas:
Everytime I read that, it just gets prettier and prettier. The smooth contours of the imagery just flows so perfectly together that I can't seem to find one favorite part.


~I hope all goes well in your neck of the woods?

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To twist one purest cause
Into an honest verse,
Itself, a call to angels.
The saddened lips of song that
Kiss away our innocence
From the vile mundane.
~justb
:iconredtalontpf:
Your poems are getting kind of naughty lately...I do like the end though :nod:
:iconsmokeofthebkeeper:
i just finished writing a piece of prose. it's not naughty :no: lol

thank you ;)

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:iconsmokeofthebkeeper:
i'll send a draft to you in your notes at some point :| lol

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:iconmalphas:
You certainly have a way of capturing the "juicyness" of the moment.

Well done.
:iconsmokeofthebkeeper:
heh thanks :hug:

btw you DO know that i have this account: triggerfinger
just letting you know although i thought i already did!? :|

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:iconmalphas:
Okay, NOW you can say you already did... :boogie:
:iconhenners:
Very nice, Bel :D

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Before you criticise someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticise them, you'll be a mile away and have their shoes! :XD:
:iconsmokeofthebkeeper:
thank you sweetheart! :)

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